Lucy Pennykettle

It's great. Really, I like it. Umm, one thing though, at the end, in three months, I would be dang lucky if I had hair. It'll take about 4 months ...

Hey Kamas, I really liked your poem. You use a lot of imagery. It was way fun to read. Extremely good for an experiment! *Thumbs up*

Beckiw: For being nice and making me laugh. Fluteluvr77:for being my buddie and being awesome! Kamas: For listening

me!!!.jpg Ha, I wish I still looked like this...

Ohhh! I'll take one... Text: Mad Scientist needs his cookies! Extras: Colours don't matter, do what you want with them. Your avvies are soo cool! Thanks a million!

Hello Fire, I'm glad you fixed your prologue. There were a couple things that stood out to me. I used to despise violence, not even able to harm a spider. ...

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Hey Doom, I really like your story, there are a couple things to fix though. The name rang in my head. I've never heard it before, but it carried the ...

Not bad for a first time! Hello Dance, I'm Lucy. So, there were a couple things that caught my eye in this story. Some of my comment's might be from ...

Hey Audrey. I enjoyed reading your story. There were a few things that caught my eye though. I jumped I had been reading A Catcher in the Rye and was ...

Hello Vivos! Nice story, I really like it. So, I have a few things about your characters. Your main character and narrator is Elizabeth right? I'm having a hard time ...

Ha ha! Nice job Forest! :D I liked it a lot! I love your choice of words, and how people classify as creeps. The only thing I have personally against ...

I'm back again! This part is so sad! Let's go over it, shall we? “You must Ari, your Mother is waiting for you.” Okay, I know from personal stuff that ...

Hi GothicButterfly. Nice job on the story. You did really well. Once home I dragged myself through the front door, sleep taking hold of my body. “Hey Pumpkie!” Greeted my ...